Tuesday, January 20, 2009
Friend Prompt
Hahahahahah Montana that was a funny joke tell us more. The word that best describes me as a friend is funny. The reason why I say that is because usually what comes out of my mouth is funny or is sure to make people laugh, when one of my friends is sad usually one of my jokes cheers them up.Also when were playing yo momma I always have the funniest jokes and win. Another reason why I'm a funny friend is because I do what most people wouldn't do, such as jumping off buildings and interrupting class. Jumping off buildings is funny because when you jump off automatically a funny face is on the person while there coming down which makes people always laugh.When my teacher is talking and I alwys have somthing funny to say which makes people laugh.This is why im a funny friend.
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Hey Montana- I thought that was a pretty good way to start your piece. Your hook grabbed my attention. I'd like to see more details in your piece. Tell me more about what you say that makes people laugh or give me some examples of what you do that people wouldn't do. Some editing comments: "describes" "because" "usually" "I'm" and don't forget to capitalize your first letters of sentences.
Was up Montana your not funny,just messing. That was a great prompt. I liked the hook. I kinda did'nt understand it. but great hook anyways. I liked all your details. I think you can give as more of this funny stuff you know>more funny details. That is pretty much it.
i think that it was good because you add lots of deatles and i like how you started and ended i like the yo momma jokes.
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